Today’s blog is going to be a super short one–I wasn’t able to work on 3 full blog posts over the weekend. You can expect these mini-posts to pop up whenever circumstances prevent me from getting all 3 posts done over the weekend. The goal is to 1) continue to make sure that I write/create content for the blog even when I don’t have a whole lot of time and 2) to make sure I don’t have any long gaps where I’m not going months without posting because of . . . life and stuff. Now on to the topic!
Rewriting Citizen X
So, today’s mini-topic is that I’m in the process of rewriting an unpublished story that I’ve previously sent out, but haven’t had any luck with selling. The story, Citizen X, is a short story set in an Alternate World/Future. Without going into too much detail, civil liberties for American citizens have been seriously curtailed and America is controlled by a technologically advanced and repressive regime. Only a few dare to speak out, but most are silenced. However, one person, a mythical “Citizen X,” whose figure is hidden under a disguise and obscured from all tech./surveillance is able to speak out against the government.
Reception to Citizen X 1.0
When I sent it out, I got rejections, but not a whole lot of comments. However, the last submission to a market, while still a rejection, gave me really good feedback. Basically, they liked the character and felt the first 1/3 of the story (it is broken up into 3 parts) was really good, but they didn’t like the direction of parts 2 & 3. They also didn’t care for the use of real world names (even though it was supposed to be an alternate history story).
Working towards Citizen X 2.0
I’m rewriting the story. I planned out a new outline over the weekend. I’m keeping most of the 1st part, but will revise it so that it matches the newer sections. Will be completely rewriting sections 2 and 3 and will move it in more of a “what happens if the hero is followed back home by the antagonists” storyline. Now, not only is the protagonist in danger, but potentially family, friends, and neighbors. While I won’t post this on my Signature Feed until I finish it, this is the story I will be working on for the next month or two.
Well, that’s all I have time for as I have grading and assignment sheets to work on for my classes! Have a great day, everyone!
Sidney
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Currently Working On (January 2022):
- The Runner (Fantasy Story–4000 words)
2022 Revision; Out to Market. - Unhallowed (Weird Western Story–4400 words)
2022 Revision: Completed; Out to Market. - The Independent (Science Fiction Story–4800 words)
2021 Revision: ACCEPTED FOR PUBLICATION